A Sweet inocent girl full of dreams, a dancer by choice thinks nothing else but dancing..whenever she is sad she dances,whenever she is free she dances
, when ever she is happy she dances..when ever she feels low she dances, whenever she is appriciated for somthing she dance...
She always dances her heart out..She doesnt know anything else but dance..She thinks she is born to dance..She cannot do any other work with such perfection... She is a dancer and dances thats all...
, when ever she is happy she dances..when ever she feels low she dances, whenever she is appriciated for somthing she dance...She always dances her heart out..She doesnt know anything else but dance..She thinks she is born to dance..She cannot do any other work with such perfection... She is a dancer and dances thats all...
Priya is the name kept by her parents and "Priya - the dancer" by her friends..
It was early november and she was getting ready for a dance performance when Puneet - the journalist droped in to take her interview along with his friend Gaurav...
On meeting Priya, Gaurav was taken a back seat...He could not stop admiring priya's beauty...He couldnt stop falling for her..and when he saw her dancing he had no doubt about his love for her...
After that day they regularly met and spend some quality time with each other...talking to each other..sharing their life with each other..they were so deep in love that the world around them seemed meaning less..
Now priya was busy dancing and gaurav admiring her, rest of the time they were together talking, making love and dreaming..
One day gaurav could not hide his guilt and had to confess that he was already married for 2 years now...
The pain was too high for priya to bear..Without a word she left him and left him for ever...The tears in her eyes took the soul out of gaurav's body..He cheated priya broke her heart made her cry...
For next 2 weeks gaurav couldnt do any thing except regretting..till he saw priya in a market place with her husband...She was already MARRIED 4 quite some time....
i think u didnt quite describe the characters enough. as a result readers wouldnt feel enough sympathy for the protagonist or anger against the guy.
ReplyDeletealso, i think getting married in 2 weeks is really too fast. U have potential..just need to take care of the narrative.
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CRD
hain?????? :o :o :o :o :o
ReplyDeleteok i dont kno how others wud react but i laffd after i read d last line...for d sheer brilliance of wat u created n how u ended it...loved it!!! awesome!!!!
@ CRD : i really didnt feel the need of describin the characters more than this..that way the write up would loose tha charm...n btw she didnt get mariied in 2 weeks..she was already maried b4 hand...
ReplyDeleteneways thanx 4 the stop....
@ mayz...thanx dear...n thanx 4 the stop...
ReplyDeleteStrange are the ways of the hearts!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat twist in the end.
One thing that I did not get was why she was saddened to know that he was married when she was herself?
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@yogesh :thanx 4 the stop...
ReplyDeletethat was the twist...unknow..1st y wa she goin round wif some1 when she was married and another y didnt she confess when the guy confessed..may b she was njoyin the relationship...